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Exodus (SciFi Short Film)

Give me constructive feedback but be aware that this was made just for fun. Dont expect professional CGI and acting, all of us are amateurs and hobbyists! The finished version of this film. I have been working on this for 8 Months. The 3D Animations and some Compositing are done in Blender 2.61. The After Effects Compositing is done by: http://www.youtube.com/user/FrediSaal16

MarsianFilms

11 years ago

Waepon systems offline Critical error, antimatter reactor will explode in 10 seconds No! When i die, you go with me It was at the end of the third world war. The Mars colony attacked the Austrian Empire We nearly destroyed the world Space defence of the Austrian Empire destroyed Beginning with attack on ground targets Aquire atmospheric fighters Confirmed, you will meet them in the lower stratosphere Our saboteur destroyed the targeting systems of the ground defense You will have no casualties (
that was my school) Nearly we destroyed earth But then they came And asked us if they can stay at saturn In return they offered us knowlenge The 3 Factions accepted At first, because they had enough of the war on the other hand because they thought, the aliens will destroy humanity Because of that, they formed an defense pact But in the next 200 years changed a lot The Austrian Empire and the Marsian Colony became a democracy We rebuild the world And we reached technological state from before th
e war was surpassed The aliens never attacked and became trading parters dictator of the coalition: But something went terribly wrong The crowd cant govern themselve They need a strong leader otherwise chaos will reign We cant left the others on their own But for that we need an advantage You have to find it in one of the alien stations above the saturn You will fly there with a special stealth fighter and download theirs complete databank Dont disappoint me! Incoming transmission My lord, we re
ceived some data from our agent Its onla a small part of the aliens databank maybe its enough, what is there admiral? Informations about their exodus to the saturn and the reason for it and that is? The were defeated in a war against a another alienspecies with lower technology but numerical superiority We also have the coordinates of their earlier homeworld Then fly there. locating a unknown object measuring high energy values transmit on all frequencies transmit on all frequencies My lord ha
s an offer for you 4 months later Incoming transmission Alien translator: One of your factions sent a ship to our earlier homeworld short time after you, dictator stole our data we assume you contacted our old enemy to form an alliance with them dictator, this was a fatal mistake they just wanted to know where we are they will come with a fleet you cant oppose The dictator wants more power while you have no power You gave it to the crowd Short time before our exodus, we inficated their organical
ships with a virus when the virus is activated, it will overload their energy lines. to activate it, you must fire special torpedos from short distance with your space fighters This will give the virus enough energy to do his destructive work solve your internal conflicts We need all fleets of the solar system agreed Its a trich, you cant fool me! The colony on proxima centauri was destroyed a hour ago Them my fleet will fight with you And now its time to activate an old common project all sh
ips on defense position raise defense shields and start the fighters. Activate the weapon systems when the enemy enters target range Its only 3 shipt, the rest of the fleet is by the saturn 3 ships, we can do it. dont die pilots Fire the torpedos, when the fleet destroyed their shields. Got it? Yer sir! Fire when the shield is down Fuck! Swarm out! Shit! dissolve fleet formation initiate evasive maneuvers concentrate the fire on a single ship Now i own you! Absorb that! Control systems damaged,
going to maximum speed! Red 5, behind you! When we loose 2 more ships, we wouldnt be able do destroy theis shield They broke through the planetary shield! They broke through the planetary shield! retreat, we must protect the refugee ships cancel retreat

Comments

@thegoodhen

This is actually really good. It takes an enormous amount of time, effort but also skills to do something like this. The CGI-only spaceship scenes were perfect and the hatred makes me sick. Brohoof.

@FranciscoPartidas

I just give one piece of advice. Correct lightning and texturing are the most important  thing to make 3D CGI looks real. No matter how good a model is, if you don't light it well it'll look plastic

@maxsmodels

The important thing is to have fun and enjoy the creative outlet.

@Purluc

I can't believe I sat through the entire thing.

@ODSTRubicon

So many dislikes... no body starts off looking like a pro.. he'll get there one day. Until then how about be a little supportive. Damn trolls

@MarsianFilms

Thanks fot taking time to write all this. I agree with all your points but to solve most of them I would need a lot of time. For the next film i decided to make it much shorter so i can focus much more on details and polishing.

@Wildcard120

A good start. Keep watching!

@TheRamseybros

most people dislike because of the CGI you used, i liked it because of the hard work you guys put into it!

@TheRXStudios

This is where its at! Good job!

@shaunfox1391

I've nothing but praise for your effort's and work.

@forcedadventure

INTERESTING WORK !!!

@FlarpyMcMaple

The CGI that you used was great during the part in the beginning when the ships were flying over the city. Until the explosions started.

@Tkivo

2:38 ''We've come too far to give up who we are So let's raise the bar and our cups to the stars''

@mykeulfafane6187

Trés bon travail de modélisation et de scenario.Tu mérite ton pouce vert :)

@ironwolf404

I liked it. The ship design was well thought out and it was a very ambitious CGI project. Good work. Never be afraid to express creativity.

@HaifischArt

Das ist sehr beeindruckend! Jeder der sich schonmal im Bereich Animation oder Film probiert hat weiß, dass das hier sehr viel Geduld und Arbeit erfordert. Respekt!

@EatSleepLiveLife

way better than what i could do

@SHONNER

14:55 That's a good planet shot right there.

@endase3013

wow, one of the best short moviels i have seen :-) realy great job

@ridlazz921

i think this is pretty epic !