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you enjoyed today's story thank you for listening exos Before the War by pe Rowe to think of a
time before the war is to think of a fantasy it seems to me now to a time when we had the
luxury of indifference when choices weren't existential didn't tear families apart that was
exos then a playground where my children were to grow unmolested by the realities of their human
past here we are haunted all over again my fears the same fears of a trilli
on mothers preceding all
told we were still lucky when the trasp came to us it wasn't a sudden shock in the dead of night in
the form of explosions and death as it was with so many others they arrived in an oddly shaped vessel
we quickly absorbed the manner of for war vessels were soon to predominate the space around us the
trasp demanded access to our system's political Authority knowing full well there was no one
such Authority in Garvin a that they told us was no longer acceptable they'd
be making specific
demands of us and there would be an authority to be held accountable if for no better reason than
to know whom to discuss consequences with should be failed to live up to their demands consequences
was a terrifying word to a collection of peoples with no means of defense and a population
living overwhelmingly on cylinders orbiting the two planetary outposts of garbanates Rocky
inner worlds to intentionally lay open the inner portions of our bulky homes to the vacuum of
space was no major challenge for even that first trespore ship we'd naively relied on our
neutrality distance and peaceful nature thinking that the virgin in Conflict couldn't spread to us
out of the direct path as we were between uterus and the trash protectorate suddenly after nearly a
full year of Rumblings here they were and here we were a network of floating cans ready to be shot
out of the Stars little more than target practice the only limiting factor the number of slugs the
trasp ha
d carried for the occasion that and the possibility that we could do something for them
more useful than cease to exist so they dealt us demands instead of Destruction for us that was the
first lesson of warfare never destroy resources that could be more useful producing for your
cause than no longer producing at all this was the entire point of the trash demands exclusivity
no longer were we to export resources to driesens or helenia before offering them to trasp they
promised two percent
above Market costs on all products in exchange for right of first refusal
all official relations with utterus commercial or political would cease immediately when the
alternative was destruction and death it hardly seemed a choice but there was no official body
or person with the authority to make that choice on behalf of both settlements which was to say
nothing of the hundreds of individual cylinders in each group realizing the state of political
Anarchy they'd found us in the trasp gave
us three months to form a Unified Government and accept
their terms leaving the consequences unspoken then they Departed the Han Outpost though
neighbors kept their political matters to themselves and were happy to have of us on exos
do the same even cylinder to cylinder there was no particular governing body established that
time had come none of us were political animals that fact was what had brought us out of the four
major civilizations of the battery into the quiet of independent comm
ercial life most of us had deep
space qualifications largely in mining but hardly limited to that one Enterprise we had an abundance
of AG Specialists Builders Traders engineers and Bot handlers we'd have remained well positioned
to survive independently if not for the want of Fighters and power Brokers among the neophytes
who went charging into that now obvious vacuum was my husband Brian David Bretton whom everyone
knew as BD except for our two daughters who knew him as Daddy nearly every
one was grateful BD did
jump into The Fray Brian David was well respected liked certainly smart and good looking often too
much so for his own good BD was well known on the EXO cylinders as a winner and a lead later in his
younger years he'd Captain the Barth foxes and led us to two exos wide football championships winning
one system-wide title though such a low population system as ours didn't boast Professionals of
the caliber found on atho sciopos or helenia our little Barth boxes meant
something to us and
the rest of exos BD was a natural choice and a popular one it wasn't merely loyalty that overrode
the misgivings I had about BD being back in the spotlight again I knew him better than anyone
despite his personal flaws he was clear-headed under pressure calculating smart even ruthless
whenever he saw an opportunity an opponent didn't yet recognize if any Among Us was going to see the
field more clearly than BD I certainly didn't know who it was if there was ever a time f
or him to
step back into the Limelight this had to be it we discussed it for several days before I gave him my
blessing my encouragement even our two settlements formed the first exploratory panel within 4 48
Hours both urgency and the people demanded a near immediate response our group of self-sufficient
engineers and skilled trades folk suffered none of the counterproductive infighting common to
political processes on larger systems it's harder was drafted from a template and individuated
with
the help of AI strategists based on population distribution six representatives were to be chosen
from Han five from the cylinders and one from the planetary Outpost while exos would have five total
wraps again with one from the planetary Outpost and four from the cylinders PD was elected with 62
percent of the vote in our district expediency was preferred to a thorough campaign otherwise some
of the political problems I came to pose would likely have come out as candidates were being
vetted four days after the trash Baltimore the 11 Representatives met for the first time to discuss
the garbanate systems response at that point the mood at least in the Barth cylinder where BD and
I made our home was that acceptance of the trash terms was a foregone conclusion I suspected that
was only because the shock of the situation had led to a strange Collective paralysis a near
complete unwillingness to explore alternative paths forward it wasn't just my ataran background
that inf
ormed my strong belief that a robust debate needed to be held it was the principle
of cherishing our independence for so long and then rushing to ratify trasps subservience at the
first threat without even a hearing I'd have felt the same way had the warship been a Terran when
BD arrived home to Barth following two straight days on Han where the talks were being held I
did my best to absorb what little he revealed of the proceedings I'd resolved while he was away to
try not to impose my vie
wpoint but when it became clear to me that the hearings were trending more
toward formality than debate I waited until we'd put the girls to bed before asking him whether
Alternatives were being discussed he glared at me nearly three straight days away from home
discussing nothing else Minka in the first minute we have a Alone Together you pull me right back
to it I saw it and tried to get him to make eye contact with me it's only the outpost's future
our girl's future BD you didn't think y
ou'd get off that easy with me no he said of all people I
figured you'd have something contrarian to say he got up from the sofa and offered me a glass of
wine I declined and he helped himself I could tell by the way he poured the wine he was upset
with me I let him stew on it for nearly a minute in silence after he returned and sat beside me the
longer I sat quietly the more frustrated he became it's a serious responsibility he said I take it
seriously that's why the people selected you lo
ve I am their representative he said not ours there
it is yes there it is five minutes of quiet time alone and you couldn't wait a minute more to
put me in an ethical conflict I couldn't help but laugh please BD tell me about your ethical
conflict merely discussing the most consequential decision in the history of this settlement with
your wife the mother of your daughters he shook his head inside no please I said we agreed not to
discuss the meetings with friends and family the rumor mill
is bad enough already the rumors I've
heard save all but agreed to the trasp terms and their rumors there's much to be determined have
you determined when there will be a public hearing BD because if I don't have a say here I'll make
sure I have one where my thoughts can be heard I appreciate that you are supportive of me Minka
after everything and I assure you every point we discuss is with the security of the system at the
foremost of our minds but you must appreciate that even if you mad
e a compelling case against this
arrangement I couldn't be the one to Champion it you're a terror and wife exactly my Italian wife
but I'm not really a Terran that should stand for something and I certainly wouldn't suggest we
Ally with them you're going to tell me anyway Minka you may as well now all I want is an
assurance that we've explored other options you're presuming we haven't but please I'll listen
if you have an idea we haven't considered helenian driesen Speedy aren't getting inv
olved they've
pledged neutrality as did we until we had our hands forced I said treason's rings are vulnerable
Are you seriously suggesting the trash would open a front with driesens and helenia while fighting
Ataris as well no what I'm suggesting is that driesens and helenia would have caused to feel
a lot more secure with the lettered systems and all the independent outposts as neutral peaceful
onlookers with their backing rather than having the entirety of the battery erupting into
conf
lict let them back a strong line far from the Eastern battery a buffer if we could
persuade them to back the independent systems that would vocalize the conflict and they and
everyone else in the sector would be safer for it I could tell by the way he bristled in silenced
for nearly half a minute that it was a position that hadn't been considered and all those hours
of meetings on Han which was exactly why there should have been open hearings I told him as
much when he'd finished musing ove
r the idea for long enough to turn and look at me they've
been clear about their intention to stay out of the conflict then we convinced them of the truth
BD they won't stay clear this demand from trasp is already an act of aggression against the treasons
the Lesser Risk by far will be in militarizing and backing the independence of the smaller systems
in what of trasp he said how do they react when they find out the first thing we did was run off
to driesens and helenia for their protectio
n we're still more useful to trasp alive is the fear of
their overreaction really greater than the real chance we could retain our independence and avoid
war he stroked his chin you have quite a head for this Minka perhaps it should have been you in the
room this week nobody wanted my head in there love I said they wanted your head a figurehead you mean
they did get a better looking head and figure I said stroking the hair above his ear you might be
the only one who believes that love I'd c
ertainly debate you on that point BD was correct about
one major point that I was totally unprepared for my ataran surname Romero was now an Infamous
surname and I had been here in the safety of our home surrounded by our close friends and Neighbors
in public debate was no longer just the sensible thing free people's did even if it wasn't meant to
do so it signaled more than simple diligence and thoroughness of thought people were picking sides
and this was not Parsons DSE versus Barth foxe
s this was existential questioning the plan meant
something now and even though nothing had been decided everyone was already behaving as though
it had Brian David was correct about perceptions I could not be seen to Champion my proposition
both because of my Heritage and because of the perception of nepotism it would surely project
nor could BD Advance the proposal for the same reasons we would need another champion a Fearless
One and in the moment courage seemed in short supply BD departe
d for Han the first thing
the following morning for another three days promising to explore the idea of petitioning the
dreesins with a few of the sympathetic delegates with Brian David's renewed public profile I'd been
wary of stepping out beyond our neighborhood where he was well liked publicly and respected for the
friend and neighbor he was in our small District Barth was a large residential cylinder though and
though most of my memories from his football days were of overwhelming publi
c support I still
had Vivid memories of the few bad incidents in the weight of the public eye this time too
it was politics not sport but I also knew I could Model A Life lived in fear to the girls so
I decided to take them out for lunch at the food court by the south aperture it had an excellent
view of the planet in the viewing gallery and the benefit of a meal I didn't have to prepare at
the restaurants what I was unprepared for was the entirely different tenor of the public gaze
there
was a certain restrained politeness to it on behalf of the children I guessed but the mood was
almost palpatly dark something bubbling beneath the people's Spirit far beyond the anxiety and
concern for the fate of our sleepy little corner of the Galaxy as we sat doing our best to gaze out
at exos and the Stars even the girls who were far too young to understand what was happening around
them they sensed that the energy of the place was wrong darkening unwelcome it was a very quiet
lunch it
was a long walk from our apartment to the aperture and I brought the stroller for Bella
because of it on the way back I let trune push her and I found myself scanning the crowd like I
imagined a security agent must while guarding a high-profile client anticipating danger with each
swivel of the head Barth had never felt other than a safe and loving home to us something had changed
that I didn't yet have the sense for I talked to BD very briefly that night on a call when he
got out of sessio
n he didn't have much energy left after their long day mostly he said they were
listening to concerns from the different factions mining Representatives transport The Growers
fears were building that once trasp had their exclusivity at gunpoint their demands would grow
as the war deepened the representatives discussed our growth potential and realistic benchmarks
for delivery then one of the miners asked the question nobody had dared to ask before if
the trash will take our medals at gunpoi
nt what's to stop them from demanding we make war
machines for them or even worse what's to stop them from conscripting our children if they grow
starved for Fighters or skilled laborers those questions had derailed the entire evening BD said
valid questions I told him he was quiet he knew where I stood unfortunately he'd yet to make any
significant progress swaying anyone to take up our position the common response was that we were far
too distant from driesen's system for Athos and iofos
to ever stick out their neck so far that's
my point to begin with BD I said to move the line so far they never feel threatened I understand he
said I'm trying to make the case I love you Minka I need to go kiss the girls for me I to go it was
an Abrupt end to a brief time to speak that day I didn't even get a chance to tell him about lunch
with the girls my concerns I had the sense there was more something more but he was gone so fast
the following day I contacted Michelle Omega she was amo
ng the few people on all of exos who shared
a similar background to me having been educated on ederis before moving out to Garvin 8 with her
former spouse she was originally from hellenia initially for reasons I wasn't ready to admit
were real Michelle was reluctant to meet me for lunch finally when I couldn't take the hint she
just said it I don't want to be seen with you Minka it's not that I have any suspicions
about you your husband is the rep for the whole District but the two of us to
gether it
wouldn't look good for either of us Michelle Minka this is getting serious come to the house
then we don't have to go out she sighed and I waited through a long uncomfortable pause before
she finally agreed to meet me at the apartment she appeared that afternoon wearing a hooded
shirt that hung nearly halfway over her eyes and she stepped inside the second I opened the
door Michelle explained that she'd been receiving undue attention from friends and colleagues about
her backgrou
nd on uterus and that suspicion she feared would only flare up further if she was seen
with the nataran people were talking about me and apparently there was some resentment toward BD for
not being more open about my background before the vote as though we should have anticipated their
totally unwarranted paranoia about my loyalties that's the word for it Michelle said paranoia
people looking over their shoulders looking for trash informers the Terran spies that's how
it happened at Veronia
they say nobody knows that I said I know menka but try telling a mob of
paranoid people there being unreasonable somebody has to you first we have to live here Michelle
these are our friends and neighbors something about the way she cast her eyes to the side made
me think she had other plans I inquired with the long look helenia she said I won't work for them
Minka not them I'm not the only one either really how many I know 10 or 15 people on Barth alone
I have a cousin in Gracia I'm going
to stay with his family until I find a place just until the
conflict is over I hope there's something to come back to Minka I really do I love exos or
at least what it was but I see here now I don't recognize I know we don't see each other much
anymore but I'll be sorry to see you go if you and BD ever need out she said we can get you out
I laughed BD and I can't leave he's the district rep she Shrugged offer stands Minka Michelle
stayed for a few more hours and played with the girls when
she left she hugged me as though she
never expected to see me again it seemed surreal the following day we stayed in the visit with
Michelle and the walk to the aperture had left me very much unsettled to the point I thought I
should discuss our safety with BD before I went out with the girls again genuine violence was
extremely rare on exos but as Michelle had made clear exos was changing I'd felt it too when I
spoke to BD again the following evening he told me he'd had some traction with
one of the key members
of the commission I didn't know for certain in the moment but I had a sense for which of the other
tenet was it's very tenuous Minka but I suspect we can get it discussed with reasons we're going
to need to set up everything properly perfect encryption and assurances of secrecy on their end
our people are very wary of this getting back to the trasp darcia's father can get us in touch with
people in the government on Athos then it'll be a few weeks before we expect to
hear anything back
from them in the meantime we're going to have to prepare to deal with the trasp it was better news
than a firm no but it sounded like a long shot it does make sense to be prepared for both eventual I
told him I've invited darcia back to exoseminka I want you to meet her I think you'll like her she's
got a great mind for this political stuff just like you sure I said I had been correct about BD's
Ally on the council it was always going to be her when Brian David arrived ho
me from Han the
following evening he introduced us to darcia Marty before her election to represent the Han
Outpost she was the youngest lead engineer on their mining service she'd come from a family of
prodigious mining industrialists from Athos whose many branches reached far out across the battery
and back to Athos again the Marty family wielded political power nearly as foundational as the
metal structures upon which the trillions and driesens made their home for most I imagine it was
difficult to see that level of depth in darcia for outwardly she seemed A sharp beautiful young
woman but she gave very little away to me she was instantly too familiar a far more dangerous
shade of old troubles long buried I could tell that even socially maybe especially socially she
was calculating and brilliant the girls were just finishing up dinner when they arrived and it
struck me that darcio is always the perfect distance from us the girls were both thrilled to
have Daddy home of co
urse and excited to have this new visitor darcya sensed whenever a step further
forward would have seemed intrusive and she had a way of standing right on the cusp of awkwardness
or overstepping watching our family smiling she was pleasant and complimentary and patient when
BD and I took turns over the course of the hour required to put two excited young children to
bed lovely wine she said when I traded places with BD as we put truni down glad you think so I
said I wouldn't have guessed it
'd be any better than what you have on Han miners aren't exactly
known for our high standards when it comes to food and drink even one from your family the extended
family that's a different story Minka I was born here though my people are Han Roughnecks it was
an obvious lie darcia Marty was no roughneck there was a long awkward silence and during it I felt
compelled to get up and help myself to a glass of wine as well by the time I joined her again she
sensed that I wanted to know about A
thos I didn't even ask the question she just started talking
about it the ethosians are of the strong belief that The Independents are too fragmented to risk
Alliance building if there are any Unity among the letters in the smaller systems it might be a
different story but the reality for them is that defending their own system with united front and
overwhelming force is a safer bet than stepping between two warring Empires they see isolationism
as the only play it's a mistake I said from o
ur perspective perhaps their strategists and
AIS game the situation from their position they don't foresee any conditions under which
either warring faction aggresses against them not so long as they're engaged with each other
what do any of us know about war I said darcia Shrugged in a way that suggested she knew more
than she was willing to share so we just roll over for trash then I said we still have a few
more people to talk to and a few more cards to play she said my family has more i
nfluence on
helenia than indrisons nothing settled yet just then BD came into the room we were just discussing
dreesins she informed Brian David as he poured himself a glass of wine I know it's not the news
any of us wanted I found myself struggling to hold my tongue as BD sat beside me stretching his arm
over my neck he knew me well enough that he could sense nearly every layer of emotion bubbling
beneath the polite face I was wearing we don't have a lot of information Minka at least not g
ood
information BD said the fighting is picked up out by Berea point in the inner campus Veronia from
what we hear is all but obliterated it won't be long before the fighting spreads throughout the
letters BD tells me of family out there darcia said don't we all she conceded as much with a
look you've spent time on eteris darcia asked me I have University what do you make of all
this she asked this madness I don't recognize it the Italian people I know them far too well to
believe they've
chosen this path for themselves it seems they did though she said not everything is
as it seems you want to believe the best in them BD said and you want to forget that we're making
deals with the very people who came to us issuing ultimatums for our lives at gunpoint it's an ugly
business BD said the rest was just small talk we sat and zipped a few more glasses of wine
before BD and I were too exhausted to continue being polite any longer darcia though looked as
though she could have gone
on all night smiling pleasantly in our living room that she could
play politics all day long and still negotiate our family's household so effortlessly baffled
me I found every second exhausting I went off to bed and waited for BD to get her settled in the
guest room when he came into the bedroom a few minutes later he stood just inside the doorway it
was almost like we could read each other so well we didn't need to talk anymore I'm exhausted he
said can we wait until she's gone Minka when
is she leaving in the morning I shook my head what
needs to be said an awful lot Minka he said just not tonight I lay down and rolled over it wasn't
the first time we'd slept with our backs to each other it might have been the first time I was
tired enough to sleep well despite the anger I dreamed about the birds on helenia only they
weren't robotic they were real birds feather and Bone a heartbeat I dreamed I held one in my hands
terrified I would crush its delicate body and when I threw
it into the air it flapped its wings and
flew away in the morning darcia took coffee but she didn't eat she insisted that she had a shuttle
to catch as she was leaving she knelt to say goodbye to truny who'd taken a liking to darcia's
easy Manner and pretty smile darcia brushed her hair in just such a way with her thumb that I
felt a pull in my gut at the base of my spine it took every ounce of self-control to keep from
shouting at her to take her hands off my child then there we all were a
gain Brian David me and
the children it was a few hours before the girls went down for a nap the fight if you could call it
that was hardly a discussion I didn't need to hear much from BD I knew that woman was lying about
Athos the same way I knew I wouldn't have her touching my children she intended to do nothing
for us for exos for her Han Roughnecks I knew she would be gone the second I got uncomfortable
here in Garvin 8 BD didn't seem to know that he was too busy professing his Fidelity
to me to
the girls to our family we need darcia he told me as soon as he thought I believed him if we're
gonna have any chance at gaining traction with helenia Minka we need her family's connections
he seemed to believe it I couldn't believe he did he happened to be standing in our kitchen
in the same spot Michelle was when she told me she was leaving exos I had the sudden clear
moment of dread I had the sense that BD wasn't particularly clueless among our Representatives
he was genuinely
representative of them he had all been so perfectly unprepared for everything
that had come our way for what was coming the trasp the war this is our home Minka BD professed
we're going to fight for it he wasn't accustomed to my being speechless whenever I'd been angry in
the past I'd always let him know it I wasn't angry though I was thinking I could tell my reticence
scared him I'm not going to let anything happen to exos he told me I smiled and let him leave it
at that in the week that
followed with bdoa on Han I began to reach out personally to anyone I could
think to talk to on Athos on helenia I still had friends from University scattered throughout the
battery I couldn't shake that image I had in my mind of Michelle saying aloud what I'd felt in
my heart I would not work for trasp I wouldn't have my daughters grow up under them the few times
the girls and I left the apartment that week I had the sense that we were walking in a foreign place
none of it had happened ove
rnight though there'd been tensions we'd ignored then well over a year
before there was the disaster at Veronia and the posturing the talk of war and we'd looked at each
other as though nothing was wrong hoping and still we were hoping all the while any of us with eyes
to see knew there was something dark at the heart of this war that was so pure and unspeakably wrong
that none of us even comprehended what it was as the days and then weeks tick by the tension
only grew in every cylinder cir
cling exos people became increasingly anxious as the treaty went
unratified the miners especially understood what it meant to be a tributary state to a larger power
many of them had come to the carbonate system to escape the grind of steady quotas imposed on
the contractors by Athos and helenia in those gluttonous consumers only demanded metals to
build and trade none of us had any mind for the demand that would be leveled Upon Us in
the service of Destruction BD called nightly with updates
he was trying he was also lying to
me about Darcy MRT who I was fairly certain was lying about everything especially her intention
to lead Han and exos through the war one of my ataren friends on Athos saw the situation with
clear eyes than anyone in Garvin 8 and she saw because she looked at darcia's own family they're
consolidating medals here faster than at any time post-construction she told me the authority
oceans are arming quietly but they're putting together the most devastating fi
ghting force in
the history of humankind business has never been better for that Marty girls family by the final
weeks before the trash were slated to return I'd given up on the hope that Athos helenia or anyone
else would come to our Aid with foresight and organization they could have saved hundreds of
settlements and billions of lives but it became clear that the gigantic bureaucracies treasons
was famous for were churning nearly as fast as they could to react to the developing war betwee
n
trasp and utterus to ask them to be proactive was to ask the impossible it was another fantasy
fueled by the naive hope that we should have meant something to them when in reality we were
a column on a spreadsheet x amount of metal and raw materials among thousands of other trading
partners not worth rearranging the entire sector's defense structure Over My Hope was now to salvage
what remained of our family by that time Michelle was getting established with her cousin on helenia
she mad
e it clear that the offer to join her there stood and I told her that a few weeks earlier it
had seemed laughable that I would leave exos now with the trasp approaching it seemed far like
earlier than I'd ever have imagined I needed to see BD first though we needed to talk about our
daughters BD and the rest of the representatives had been in session on Han for weeks trying to
settle the terms of the system surrender no one was honest enough to frame it that way though and
because of that t
hey either weren't yet aware of the reality that the subjugated don't dictate the
terms of their own servitude or they weren't yet ready to tell the public this hard fact BD didn't
talk as though it had quite sunk in for him it struck me that they were straining to put the
system in some satisfying order to the internal factions on Han and exos when trash arrived though
I knew they would simply dictate their own terms and certainly they wouldn't be written to satisfy
our people's needs I to
ld BD I needed to come visit him he insisted he'd come home no I said we
need to talk outside the apartment BD got quiet I know you're upset that I've been away so much he
said I knew what he was going to say and I did encourage you to run as our representative Brian
David I did I do regret that but probably not for the reasons you might think how do you know what
I think Minka I'm coming to see you I'll be on hot and tomorrow that afternoon I took the girls
down to the aperture again they
were beginning to feel penned up and were growing antsy ironically
I was starting to feel Freer than I had in weeks it wasn't that I didn't feel the emotions I knew
I should have but the existential reality of the trasp gave me a Clarity of purpose that dulled
everything else to A Chorus of Whispers while in front of me it was a single voice a clear certain
voice calling me forth toward a single purpose I was unafraid the girls and I ate lunch amidst
The Whispers louder as they continued to
grow a Terran a Terran they bothered me no longer
because I was calm so were the girls after we'd finished eating we stood in the darkened
observation room overlooking the planet gazing at exos and the stars as the whole of the cosmos
spun trune kept looking up at me sensing something meaningful about the moment but she was too
young to understand what Bella was too young to do anything other than Wonder at the spinning
Planet how it floated out there up and around again go back to uterus
someone shouted from
behind one of the benches along the causeway she a woman's voice scolded him awful man there
were some other muffled words I couldn't make out followed by children I didn't turn
around just looked down at the girls I couldn't keep from smiling even at their worst
the people here still had a decency about them I still had a sitter I knew we could trust so
the following afternoon I left the girls at home and set off for Han I dressed much the same way
Michelle had the af
ternoon she'd come to visit two months prior all kinds of rumors were circulating
some of them about BD breton's a Terran wife I'm sure probably some about him and the single young
representative from Han most of the rumors were nonsense per usual not all of them were I kept to
the corners and watched my surroundings it wasn't so much fear as vigilance I sat by the window
on the brief trip over to Han the majority of the flight burning at low sub light on both ends
of the jump it made for i
nspiring views of our little system exos with her Rocky red Browns and
Han her bright white glow like the pictures of the Moon of Earth all those little spinning
cylinders where most of us lived I saw two visions of each one as garbanate was then as my
memories would always keep it in my heart Han and before the war the second Vision wasn't of flame
but of the floating husks of cylinders blown open to space destroyed too fast to even burn the
outposts the trasp would need to destroy for the
people who hadn't fled by then would surrender
or they would die of exposure running off into the Arid landscape when the trash strike Bots came
down to clear the city this horrible Vision was a gift Odd as it may sound it was like knowing
the future I had the same dual understanding of my situation with Brian David I knew I should
have been enraged after swearing on all that was most sacred to us to never let it happen again
here we were the most critical hour of our Lives being pulled ap
art again by his worst impulses but
above the emotion was that same Clear loud voice a Clarity of purpose rendering all else trivial
emotions now were a luxury I could feel it later I met BD in the suite where the representatives
were being housed it was perhaps the nicest room I'd ever seen in the entire Garvin 8 System he
kissed me on the cheek and invited me to sit and he began by apologizing for being away from us
for so long BD I hope you don't feel as though I pushed you into this tha
t's what I fear more than
anything that you'll stay here to The Bitter End out of loyalty to the people we both love here
what do you mean stay Minka where would we go I know about you in the Marty girl Brian David
don't debase us both any further by lying BD I can feel it his head dropped any side you don't
need to say anything I need you to know I do love you I just see you in a different light I told you
last time I wasn't going to go through this again Minka I'm sorry I never meant to h
urt you to hurt
the girls I didn't come here for an apology BD I didn't cry this time there were no histrionics
neither for me nor him but took a deep breath together when they come I said I cannot be here
our own neighbors are already cursing me for my ataran name I won't have my daughters grow up
in fear or be taught to resent their own mother where will you go Michelle Omega has arranged
for passage for me and the girls to helenia we're going to stay with her until I got word
it's safe
to head toward the letters if the fighting is still far back we'll try to get out
to my parents it's best the girls be somewhere safe he said best you b2bd I'd love it if our
daughters still had their father when they get to be our age nobody thinks it's going to be as
bad here as you seem to make a the trash Barn interested in fighting us they just want us
to supply resources please don't stay here to die for these people I told him they wouldn't die
for you I took this position to ensure
nobody has to die I'm not going to abandon everyone before
the trasp even arrive you need to come home with me tonight I told him your daughters need to kiss
their father goodbye Eastside it won't BD stopped he almost said it I knew him so well I knew
what he was going to say about what it would look like to the people on both settlements
to have his wife run off the signal that would send then he almost apologized for thinking it
what time's the next shuttle he said instead some wounds hur
t so completely you cannot
properly feel them I think the Mind does things to us we cannot know the mechanisms of
self-preservation these scars we carry don't make us any better just different how untouched
we were then such joyous creatures in the years that follow I will remember that there was an
exos before the war and there will be one again exos before the war this has been an original
story written and read by pe Rowe thank you for listening I'd like to take a moment to thank all
th
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Congratulations again on showing the human cost of the events in your fictional universe. I didn't cry this time though.
I love listening to audible books to fall asleep. I stumbled on your channel and find myself waking and rewinding to the last thing I remembered, because I need to know what happened. I don't normally do that with stories. Love these. You have rare talent. God bless...
That was too personal... too real... very good writing.
brilliant story and even though it's portrayed in the future, it is so real for now, Well written well done.
I am stunned. Your work is always so real! I don’t know how you do it, but it’s just amazing!
How Rowe can change the inflection in the narration between the characters is fantastic I know who is doing the talking, but to go between male and female is even better. (Hope no one is offended)
Wow well written story thank you
Good story. I subscribed.
Excellent
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Watching now
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I have just found your channel and love the world building and stories. They are really great with a lot of rich character developments. But my problem what order should I listen them in? I first listened to Garaged Rock, Archologist and then Exos: Before the War. But I feel like I messed up the order. Any suggestions which ones I should listen to and in what order? Thank you
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P.E. ROWE were you the narrator?????!!!!
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