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Garbage Rock | Sci-fi Short Audiobook

"You can put your troubles in a box; that doesn’t mean they’ll stay there." Written toward the topic: "Using Asteroids as Spaceships" As always, thanks to Isaac Arthur and the SFIA team for another great topic! Video: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=grfLUOOARBw If you prefer to read rather than listen or would like to read along, full text of this and all my Sci-Fi Weeklies are available though my Substack: https://perowe.substack.com https://perowe.substack.com/p/garbage-rock Now on Twitter: https://www.twitter.com/PERowe4 Support (greatly appreciated): https://www.rowelit.com/support Sci-Fi Collections: https://www.rowelit.com/collections-sf-shorts More on this story: https://www.rowelit.com/garbage-rock More on this project: https://www.rowelit.com/sci-fi-weeklies For the serious writers out there: Mechanics of Fiction Writing Series https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCnRJzfG2BEMJusZSnaAG_Ew About this project: I am writing a weekly sci-fi story to the theme of Isaac Arthur’s SFIA videos. It’s a crazy challenging timeframe to create a good short story in, and to do so publicly is even more daunting. I’m just hoping some good stories come out of this, I have fun writing them, and most importantly, the audience enjoys! Thanks for stopping by! (Neither this channel nor this video are affiliated with or endorsed by Isaac Arthur or SFIA, the author’s just a big fan)

P.E. Rowe

1 year ago

Before we get into the story, please  remember to take a moment to like, subscribe, share with someone you think  would enjoy it, and leave a comment if you appreciate the work. You can also find  links in the description to my website, bookstore, and other great stuff. With  all that said I hope you enjoy the story. Garbage Rock by PE Rowe Interview #4766. Barrier System 13,  Danisport: Scout City. “Clem Aballi; the seed seller.” Interviewed by Barnard Boss. *Interviewer’s notes: For reasons th
at will become apparent, the  following interview was perhaps the most noteworthy of my survey of the Barrier systems. It  was not unusual for me to interview an unscheduled participant in the Barrier Systems Oral Histories,  but this almost always happened in the form of me noticing a person who looked interesting or was  doing something noteworthy, such as a street performer or famous local athlete or artist. My  presence in Scout City, though, became conspicuous when the local news service so
licited an interview  of me upon my arrival. The piece that ran on their news feed publicized my presence and discussed the  importance of the historical project’s reach into the outer systems. So I was recognized several  times over the four days I was in Scout City. On the third day, I was sitting in the Aerodrome  lounge after interviewing the city’s mayor when I was approached by a striking young man  who had seen the news feed and recognized me. I remembered his appearance, because he  had
piercing eyes, distinct, dark eyebrows, and he seemed extremely intense and insistent.  And I remembered his flight coat, which was dull red with a white stripe running down the  sleeves. I thought it looked like a uniform flight coat for a freight shipping company. The young man told me that if I wanted to interview someone I’d never forget, he could  connect me with Clem Aballi, and when I asked the young man why Mr. Aballi would be such a  fascinating interview, he informed me that Clem Aball
i was the only person ever to “escape the  rocks,” which was a term I’d never heard before, even having spent over a decade living in  Dreeson’s system, where he claimed the “rocks” were located. The young man was shocked by my  ignorance. But I was intrigued enough by his story to get his contact information. I told him I’d do  some research and reach out if I was interested in interviewing Mr. Aballi. The young man smiled  and extended a hand, which I shook and instantly regretted, for his was
an unpleasant, cold,  clammy hand, and sweaty, and I felt awkward until I could get to the washroom to cleanse my hands. While briefly researching the matter afterward, I learned that everyone out here had heard of  the rocks and knew the story of Clem Aballi’s escape. Outside the Battery systems, I came  to find out, this was a popular folk-tale of sorts. I subsequently confirmed the reality  of the “rocks” but wasn’t able to confirm any record of a Clem Aballi from the Athosian  authorities;
though I was unsure whether this was stonewalling on the government’s part or  whether the name Clem Aballi was a fabrication to begin with. The Athosian correctional  bureau would not confirm or deny whether there was a record of any inmate ever escaping  their custody. I was sufficiently intrigued that I contacted the young man and had him set up  a meeting so I could interview Clem Aballi. Mr. Aballi told me he would only meet me in a  public place, and he directed me to a fairly well-traffic
ked tram stop about a block from the  Aerodrome and the city’s air field. I was sitting at the tram depot bench, drinking a coffee when  Mr. Aballi approached. I was surprised by his appearance, because in my mind, I’d imagined a  young, intimidating sort for a prison escapee; though I wasn’t afraid, because out here in  the Barrier systems there was no danger of extradition, even if Mr. Aballi was some  sort of fugitive from the Athosians. He couldn’t have been further from my image of  him. He
was old, nearly elderly, with a tan, wrinkled face and bright white hair. He seemed  to carry a charismatic, care-free disposition, or perhaps it was the fearlessness I noticed in  him. He certainly carried himself differently from most men I’d ever encountered. I assumed  the connection between him and the young man was that they worked for the same company,  because Aballi wore the same flight coat, which was how I identified him. He came over to  me and introduced himself and asked me what h
e should call me. In order to keep the meeting  as informal as possible, I invited him to sit and asked him to call me Bob. He didn’t sit,  so I stood. He asked me the first question: what I thought of the Barrier systems. I told him  I liked how free people seemed to live out here, even though I’d yet to come across a city  quite as nice as any in the inner Battery. I joked: It’s not like Athos out here. And that began our interview. Don’t let them fool you. Not everyone  lives large on Athos.
They have that image, but that’s just what it is—image,  which is how something appears to the outside world. On the inside, all  those people are just like everyone else, all us hustlers in the outer systems. Liston  told me you wanted to hear about when I did time in Dreeson’s? I didn’t do as much time as I  should have, not nearly as much as they gave me. He told me you escaped from one of the rocks? What do you want to hear about it? How I got out? Sure. I guess they’re not going to throw me
  back in prison again at my age. Plus, I haven’t been back in the Battery for over  fifty years now. Things are better out here. People are real. The thing about people on  Athos—it’s really something—they have this way of living on the benefit of others, and then  they pretend they can’t see these other people who build and maintain their world for them. Or  maybe they can’t see them. They just don’t exist. They didn’t see you escaping,  so maybe that’s good for you. Ha. You’re funny. They did
n’t  see me, no. Not that day. How did you escape? How did I get off the rock? Don’t you want to  know how I got on the rock in the first place? Sure. Tell the whole story. Tell  it how you remember everything. How’d you end up there in the first place? Yeah, sure, sure. I was a trader. That’s a  long story how I got into that, but that’s what I was doing when I got pinched. Back then I was working for my uncle, trading in bots. They had billions of them in  Dreeson’s. It was almost unbelievable
how many bots there were on those rings, but once you see  the size of those rings around Athos and Iophos with your own eyes, you have to imagine it took  a billion steel-working units a thousand years to put them together. And when you have—I don’t  know how many people it was back then—let’s say two trillion people living there, something  like that, you have to regulate the bots. Strict licensing. This operating system could  go in that unit, only so many AI per cohort, only so much operati
ng speed, general  intelligence, and so forth. And that’s how I got into trouble in the first place. I was innocent. I was innocent. Don’t get me wrong. My uncle might have done some  things, yeah, but me? I was clean. But you sold some AIs you shouldn’t have? That’s what I got accused of—cloning AIs and  selling them to ordinary people. The business leaders and politicians, it was okay for them to  have whatever AI they wanted. Managers, teachers, engineers and their assistants, regular  citize
ns? They got what they were given. We had access. And those hard recycled units that  were mostly left over from the construction era, they had pretty good capacity to run some  sophisticated beings on them. It was a serious thing to get accused of. They sorta  viewed it as a form of subversion, which it was. When they see their betters come down to  them saying, “No, no, no. We can have this unit, but not you.” It kinda gave the game away. Put a  truth to the lie about their little—well, their
gigantic little false utopia there on Athos. I thought you were innocent? I never said I was innocent. I said I  was clean. I never did nothing wrong. But you ended up on one of the rocks? Yeah, Frequency. Its call sign was Frequency,  but everyone in there called it Garbage Rock, the prisoners, the guards. I don’t know how  many rocks like it they had in Dreeson’s, but some sick politician got the  idea to put all their prisoners in the asteroids. I guess they figured  they didn’t want them t
o be seen, so they put them in a place they couldn’t  ever get out of, never be seen again. But you did. Maybe I did, yeah. I don’t know  if I was the only one ever, but nobody’d done it before. Probably  somebody did it after. Maybe not. How did you get out? Well that was the only crime I did, really. I  didn’t hurt nobody. Not really. Inconvenienced is probably the right word. Do you want to hear  the whole story, or just how I got off the rock? I’m not in any rush. Neither am I. You get to be
my age, you don’t  rush anymore. Those days are over. Anyway. So what was it like being in there? You had to understand. It’s like anything  else. People build up these ideas around them. Identities. Values. Stories. You have  to understand the real from the fake. The whole thing was a production. Very theatrical.  It’s real, yeah. The first time you go in on the transport ship, the bots perform their role.  The human guards tell you, “So this is how it’s gonna be out here,” and so forth. And I
guess I  could see the unreality of it, how each guy was just playing out his role. I used to picture  each guard as an eight-year-old, just trying to figure out which kid he was on the  playground. Which ones grow up to be prison guards. Then they were just funny to me. But the image. That first image when you get pulled off the ship. You’re inside this enormous  cavern where the ships dock up. And they leave you there when the ship pulls away and the nanosheet  goes up, and you’re looking out
into the docking bay thousands of meters tall. And out there,  it’s space. Stars. They want you to see it. No way out. Just emptiness out there, and you’re  in here. No escape. They do it to break you. But it didn’t break you? It certainly made an impression. I’ll say  that. Looking out from the center of an asteroid and they say to you, “You’re  stuck in here till we say you get out,” and it looks like no way out. You’re  stuck in there. It’s a tough moment, sure. But, no, it didn’t break me. 
It woulda taken more than that. How long was your sentence? Seven years. They gave me seven years. And how long— Six months. I served six months. Yeah, from  that moment they held us there in that room, it was exactly six months I got out. Most guys, they  break right there. I could see. Looking around at those other guys. Then they turn around and pull  you to the lift to bring you down to the cells. They have spin gravity in there? On the cell block and the work area. Yeah.  The Athosians, sa
y what you will about them, but they take human rights seriously, and keeping  someone in low G that long, that’d break you down. What were the cells like? Isolating? Oh, no. They only put you in isolation  as a last resort. They put you right in with another prisoner to get you acclimated. What do you mean acclimated? They want you in the system, mind and body.  And the cellmate is the one that breaks you in. They tell you what’s what. The last  thing they want is people in isolation, because t
hen you can think for yourself.  They want you in with another prisoner, because the first thing you find out is which  one is going to be higher on the pecking order, usually the one that’s there first. It’s  the cellmate that puts you in the hierarchy, and once you’re in the hierarchy,  you’re a prisoner to it. You belong. You don’t think it’s because  they don’t have space? Space? Yeah, they only have to build half as many rooms. You think there aren’t enough asteroids  for all the prisoners
on Athos? It’s not cheaper? Trust me. They don’t do it to save resources. It’s  to keep the hierarchy all under the same thinking. If they allow you too much time alone, people  can start thinking for themselves. One person thinking for himself can break an entire system.  They want that hierarchy on you. That’s what gets you to behave. The crowd moves one way, everyone  moves that way too. Humans are social creatures. So you had a cellmate. Yeah, Worm. His name was Worm? His last name was Warme
ister and nobody  but the guards knew his first name. The guards called him Warmeister, and he told  me he always went by Worm, even as a kid. What was that like, the first time  you got put in a cell with him? He was a huge guy. He was? Oh, yeah. He was a full head taller than me  and built like an Etteran strike infantry model. And he walked me right up against  the wall, told me I was on the top bunk, what I could touch and couldn’t  touch, touch my bunk and I’ll beat your brains out. The who
le thing. I  think they paired me with him on purpose. What did you say when he threatened you like that? I sorta shrugged it off. You don’t want to  challenge a guy like that, but you can’t show him you’re afraid either. I think I asked him why  I would want to touch his bunk anyway. Initially, I was a little worried he wouldn’t warm up to  me, but after a couple days, I won him over. How’d you do that? Was it one thing, or just  being stuck in a room together all the time? Yeah, they had a sou
ndcloud fixed to the wall  so each guy could plug in to the reprogramming classes and lectures and all that. And I started  listening to the anger management sessions because they were calming, helped me to sleep, and one  night he says, Clem, if you start quoting that garbage to me, I’ll feed your liver to you. So I  tell him, Worm, you sound like a man who hasn’t self-actualized and gotten in touch with his  inner vulnerabilities. And he laughed his ass off. Clem, he says, you’re a funny guy.
And from  then on, he trusted me. Never threatened me again. Did he know you were planning an escape? At first, all I could tell him was that  I was going to get him out of there, but I told him I couldn’t tell him how. Did he believe you? I’m not sure, but he didn’t have much to lose in  acting like he did, or at least he didn’t think he had much to lose, but even someone with  a life sentence still has that life to lose. So tell me what it was like. What  did you two do to plan your escape? Th
ey made everyone work. They coulda  trained their bots to clean up the system, but they used us prisoners to keep us busy. Doing what, exactly? Are you from Athos, Bob? Hellenia originally, but I  lived on Athos for a while. So maybe you don’t know about all the garbage out in the system. There’s a lot of  junk floating out in Dreeson’s. In space? Where else? People don’t think about that,  because the bots did almost all of the framing of both rings. And they’re good about  safety compared to h
umans, but if you’ve got a billion bots that are 99.999% perfect, those  mistakes add up over time at that scale. So in the course of building the rings, hundreds  of thousands of pieces of metal, fittings, tools—all kinds of things—they just floated  away. That’s the best kept secret in the system, that all that stuff is just floating around  out there, and most of it will never crash into anything, but it happens, especially out in  the cylinders. People get killed all the time, and they’re go
od at keeping it quiet, but every  prisoner out on the rocks knows what’s going on, because that’s what they got us  doing, recycling all that metal. Wait. This is blowing my mind. I’d never  heard that. It makes sense, though. Yeah, you can’t build a planetary ring that  spans a gas giant the size of Athos and not create a mountain’s worth of floaters. Everything  out there moves at thousands of kilometers an hour. So they send out the rocks to pick up all  that garbage before it hits a ship or
something. How do they reel it all in? Each rock has a drone fleet that has mechanical  arms, hooks, and magnets. They go out all day, bring stuff in, and the prisoners on all  different shifts run a foundry and recycle all that metal for other purposes. Like I said,  they could have bots do it, but it gets the guys out of the cells and gives them a purpose. And  that’s the time the guards have to watch us, but they’re all complacent, or they were before  I showed up anyway. The prisoners didn’
t think anyone could ever escape, so the guards didn’t  either. In a way it made it easier. They were only watching to make sure all the metal  stayed accounted for. It was weighed and measured and if anything was off, everyone got  scanned before they got sent back to the block. How many human guards did they have in there? Not a lot for the number of guys in the  blocks, but they had strike bots to keep the peace. Even a guy like Worm didn’t  want no part of an Athosian strike bot, so whatever
problem guys had with one  another, you got a short window to settle it, because once those bots come in the room, it’s  over. Fastest, most vicious fights I ever seen. Did you ever get put down by one of the bots? Not me. No way. I know better than that. Some  guys did though. Some guys can’t control their anger. Didn’t matter what the consequences  were. I felt sorry for them. It was like there was nothing could be done to stop the  eruption—except for the bots. Didn’t end so good for those g
uys most of the time. Those models  weren’t programmed to be gentle with us convicts. So you’d break down the metal all day and listen to the soundcloud when you’re not  working, and that’s mostly your day? Not much else in there, no.  Grub. Sleep. Chess sometimes. So at what point do you  start plotting your escape? Right away. I was figuring  things out from minute one, day one. There’s no way I’m doing seven years. How do you even begin to plan a  prison escape from an asteroid? Well, the fir
st part is the real part, right?  They tell you, there’s no way off the rock, but the guy telling you is on a three-day shift,  and then he goes home to his family on Athos or the cylinders or wherever he’s from. So really,  what they’re telling you in so many words is there’s no way off the rock for you prisoners.  “Me? I’m going home in three days.” So the first question is how do you get home, Mr. Guard?  Then, the next question is how do I hitch a ride. And then you gotta work back from ther
e.  So I had to convince Worm to do a lot of things, cause distractions, gather information, talk  to guys, because you get one shot at it, and it’s right at the time security is highest,  because that flight is the only way on or off for a human. Then you gotta start to learn the  patterns of the guards, their personalities, their habits, when they come and go. Three months or so in, I had my target. Young kid named Preski. Personable, dumb, wanted  to be everyone’s friend, or acted like it any
way. Why’d you choose him? We were the same height. Plus, like I  said, he was stupid. So Worm started charting out his movements, especially  on the days he would get off shift. Then, we had to figure out all the procedure and  protocol for guards getting off the rock. Most of it we could plan, other parts I would  have to improvise on the fly. Preski’s shift would arrive in the morning, so we knew  they changed shifts while we were asleep, which actually made things easier. We just  had to fig
ure out exactly when they left. How’d you manage that if you were sleeping? Worm asked Preski. Like I said, he was  dumb, and he wanted to be friends with everyone. He had no idea Worm was feeding me  information, and he figured Worm for an idiot, because he was, so Preski just thought  they were making harmless banter, commiserating about working the night shift, and  really, he was feeding me logistical information about when the shuttle arrived to bring  the guy home—exactly when to make my m
ove. What did you do to Preski? Like I said. He was inconvenienced. And Worm? Still incarcerated for all I know. How did it all go down? Day of, we worked our regular shift in the  foundry, and my plan was to get everyone all amped up by starting a fight in the sorting room.  So I get Worm to start taunting one of those guys who just can’t control himself, a guy about my  size everyone called Switch. When he went off, nobody wanted to be near him. Even Worm was a  little nervous—the guy was so a
ngry. I can’t remember what Worm said to get him going.  Called him stupid, maybe something about his mother—real dumb stuff. So Switch goes off  and he and Worm start pounding on each other, and I jump in to make it seem like it’s an all-out  brawl and three or four other guys jump in too, and in come the strikers, so I sneak out of  the pile and put my hands up before those strikers start throwing bodies around. Switch got the worst of it from Worm, but he got his punches in too. Then the  str
ikers started pounding on both of them to set an example to the rest of us. The whole  thing was over in less than a couple minutes, but a lot can happen in two minutes. It was the  worst fight I seen the entire time I was in there. Worm was all banged up, but he was smiling. He  liked a good fight, plus he thought the plan was working. We all got separated and  brought to different sorting stations, and they doubled up the guards and strikers  on our detail for the rest of the afternoon. Preski
, who’d gotten pretty friendly with Worm,  hung close to our block trying to calm everyone down. Worm got worse as the day went on. The  strike bots banged him up in the chest pretty good. The plan was to fake a serious injury,  but as the afternoon wore on and we were back in our cell, Worm started moaning for real  down on the bottom bunk. He was determined, though, not to show any serious signs  of trouble till the lights went out. Preski came by twice in the evening to check on  Worm. And he
said he was okay, but he wasn’t. He was struggling. I could hear. I kept saying  to him, you all right down there, big fella? “Even better when we get out of here, Clem,” he’d  say back. Just a couple more hours, I told him. We waited, and Worm fell asleep, and the plan  was for Worm to make like he was struggling to breathe and I couldn’t wake him up. Then,  when Preski came in to see what was going on, I’d jump down, choke him out,  and walk out wearing his uniform. Preski came into your cell
by himself? No. With two strike bots.  Always. That was protocol. Didn’t the bots take you out? What did I tell you I went in for? Illegal AIs. I know a few things about how to manipulate bots. With no tech? Who said I didn’t have any tech? Didn’t they scan you going in? Of course they did, but you can’t scan  for tech you don’t know exists, can you? What about the other guards though?  Couldn’t they tell that Preski was missing? He wasn’t. I don’t understand. I walked right onto that shuttle w
ith the other  five guards from Preski’s shift, sat down, and pretended to drift off to sleep so nobody  would talk to me. When the shuttle landed at Athos, one of the other guards tapped me  on the shoulder, I pretended to wake up, and got up and walked off the shuttle and  disappeared into the crowd on the ring. I snuck off Athos in a pillbox in the freight  container on a friend’s cargo ship. Two days later I got outta the pillbox on Atalanta,  and I never went back to the Battery since. Okay
, so wait. How do they not  recognize that you’re not Preski? He’s not your long-lost twin brother or anything. He didn’t look anything like me. Then how did you get off the rock? Like I said, right off with the  guards. The thing you don’t get is that the eyes can’t see what they see  until the brain sees it too. If the brain sees Preski, it doesn’t matter what the eyes  see. The brain is a hamburger with a pulse, Bob. There’s tech in this galaxy that can  make it see anything, just like it can
make a dumb AI act like a smart one and make a  smart one mistake a prisoner for a guard. Tech like that can’t be legal. You joking? I don’t know. I’ve never heard  anything like that before. That’s the thing about you Battery folks.  You think there are rules out here? Before humanity split, there were no constrictions on  AI. They created beings in sealed boxes with no moral limitations, no ethical constraints,  technologically perfect psychopaths. Some of the things those AIs thought of give
s  me chills. Just like the asteroid, Bob, you can put your troubles in a box;  that doesn’t mean they’ll stay there. How was Worm supposed to get off the rock, Clem? He wasn’t. I told him I would get  another uniform for him and be back in an hour. He was so dumb he  thought I was coming back for him. He could be dead for all you know. Could be him and Preski are  dead. What do I care? Both those guys belong on Garbage Rock, alive or dead. What kind of AIs were you  trafficking on Athos, Clem?
What do you think, Bob? I don’t know. That’s why I’m asking. Let me ask you something, sport. Did you feel  better about yourself, about your big pretty rings before you talked to me? So confident.  Just like the rest of them. So proud. They used to say pride comes before a fall. How far do you  think you people from the Battery have to fall? I shook my head at Clem and shrugged,  as I didn’t have a proper answer. You can’t even conceive of it. You.  Falling. What did I sell on Athos? I sold see
ds. You can sleep well at night  knowing how many of my seeds got planted. I’m done talking. I hope you were listening  good. Tell them all back home to listen good. *Interviewer’s notes (continued): I didn’t thank Clem Aballi or shake his hand as  I’d done in all the thousands of interviews I’d conducted among the outer systems. He merely  walked away, seemingly disgusted with me; by what exactly, I still am not sure. Normally, I let a person’s words stand alone in an interview, but given the 
nature of what Clem Aballi reported to me during his interview, I cannot leave  the following occurrence out of the account: When he’d finished talking, Clem  walked away with his back turned, and I followed him with my eyes as he left.  His flight coat was distinct—that dull red with that white stripe running all the way from  the shoulders down the sleeves to his wrists, where he’d rolled the cuffs back. It was  impossible to mistake him from anyone else, even in that crowd. Clem walked about
thirty  meters toward the Aerodrome that housed the shuttle between the city and the air field.  As he turned the corner, the wearer of that distinct coat suddenly no longer appeared to be  “Clem Aballi,” or at least that person whose face I’d accepted as belonging to that name. I could  clearly see the same striking dark eyebrows of the man I’d seen in the Aerodrome lounge who’d  recommend I talk to Clem Aballi in the first place. With him moving away from me and shortly  disappearing behind a
building thereafter, what little else I could discern of his face at that  distance was turned down in a sharp, nefarious smile. I struggled for some time to think of a way  he could have manipulated my mind so convincingly without ever having come into contact with  him, until I remembered the handshake, that clammy hand. Still I have no sense for what  he could have passed through my skin with a simple handshake, and the several scans I’ve undergone  to answer that mystery haven’t unearthed a
thing. Among the billions of good-hearted, pioneering  people of the Barrier systems, Clem Aballi, the seed seller, walked free, sowing wild  tales I hoped were nothing more than fiction, though judgement tells me what I encountered  here was real. Whatever else Clem Aballi was sowing out here apart from stories, I hope the  good people of Athos will never come to know. "Garbage Rock" This has been an original  story written and read by PE Rowe thank you for listening. I hope you enjoyed this st
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@dgage7776

Always an absolute treat to find a unique author who posts their stories for free. 👌

@axelhoogland9442

This is the 3rd or 4th video of yours I've watched. Really good stuff. Keep it up

@KeithCarmichaelInFL

I don’t understand how easily you spin these characters into such interesting draws for each and every story!

@lukejavor4739

That was great! Cool to hear an SFIA fan's imagination at work too

@XAmericanRenegadeX

Very well done. From one writer to another, thank you for your artistic contribution.

@dhartist

A great one! Super cool. Thank you for sharing!

@karlgru3n654

First timer. Good story and read. Subbed. Thank you.

@Pewpro

Dude! Do you write these? Great work man! I subscribed and I'm stoked to hear more scifi yarns

@avishalom2000lm

Just your description of the system told me you must have been influenced by Isaac Arthur. Loved the story! Big fan of sfia as well!

@mulllhausen

I loved this! And the vault. Excellent!

@tarajoyce3598

Enjoying your work. Thanks

@JustJanitor

This was really good. Thank you

@timkevwitch862

Unbelievable how you can write some of the best scifi I've ever read in such a short time. I was bummed when I realized ep11 was the last story. So it continues Thursday?

@StraightJacket5150

Well done. liked/subd - Can't get enough Sci-Fi!

@johnjones2nd667

I enjoyed that very much. Thank you.