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The Lagrange Structure "A small crew of astronauts investigate a large structure found in a remote orbital pattern opposite of the sun and earth. As if placed there to be permanently hidden from Earth--the origin and nature of the structure is unknown. And what they find inside is terrifying on a physical and cosmic level." Author ► Miles Garn Support the Channel: ► https://bit.ly/MagnetarMember Music From: ► https://www.epidemicsound.com/music/ ----------------------------------------------- #Scifi #creepypasta #space

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the structure was first discovered by telescopes in high Martian orbit structure was an estimated 800 to 1100 meters in length located in the third LaGrange Point relative to the Sun and Earth first images suggested the structure was artificial in origin and not a natural formation our initial assumptions were of American origin however NASA denied any prior knowledge of the structure or where it came from over the space of two years further images seemed to verify the structure as man-made agai
n NASA cnsa and Ross Cosmos denied any additional knowledge of the structure or who built it the object is located in LaGrange point three relative to the Sun and Earth this point is significant as the structure shares Earth's orbit but is precisely on the opposite side of the Sun due to this the sun is always between the structure and the Earth to place an object of that size in a location that remote would require significant effort from multiple space agencies it is our opinion that the LaGra
nge structure is neither natural or coincidental it is Our intention to launch an international expedition to assess the nature significance and potential origin of the LaGrange structure Johan H Wells director of European Space Agency May 28 2089 20 kilometers enclosing a ram looked up from the instruments and spotted a faint glint of metal against the inky backdrop of deep space Dean adjusted the velocity and the others crowded against the viewing port to the nose of the Irv black water the on
board cameras brought the structure into frame in a hushed gasp filled the cabin 14. the structure was long and slender with two rings attached to the center fuselage underneath the canopy of solar panels facing the Sun hayward's breath fogged against the glass a bit of sweat dotted orom's forehead it was right there eight Dean pulled back further five Oram gulped easy the structure was easily three times the size of the International Space Station three two the Black Water matched the orbital s
peed of the structure and the crew stared in silence bring us in closer Dean Hayward ordered we tether at 800 meters then bring us that for a moment the two ships seemed to hang Motionless In Space Lincoln and keys waited in their spacewalk gear deploying tether Oram directed an anchoring cable to the structure well looks like no one's home Hayward commented search for a weigh-in a pair of faint Trails of exhaust followed the two bodies as they drifted through the exposed vacuum of space aided b
y thrusters and held by nothing but the tethers attached to their suits the atmosphere in the cabin seemed to thicken Lincoln's hand reached out and grabbed a Ladder rung along the side of the fuselage the cabin breathed a sigh of relief give us another 10. the cable word and slack into their tethers Brown replied a little bit of everything I'm seeing Alloys and composites looks a bit like our stuff the structure certainly appeared to be a vessel of some sort from the Black Water Brown and Linco
ln appeared as little more than white specks against the dark superstructure it appears to have been built modularly Hayward shook his head it's enormous no one could have launched this in the 20th century right the structure always remained on the opposite side of the Sun from the Earth satellites in orbit around Mars were able to relay Transmissions to the earth-based mission control while Blackwater wasn't entirely alone surely felt that way along the curve to your right please confirm or I'm
panned with a surveillance drone and a hole in the wall of the structure appeared on screen Lincoln and brown converged on the breach Brown moved first and disappeared inside Lincoln followed the radio buzzed and their vitals flickered on the monitors and then cut out altogether the crew stirred an alarm there was no response from this distance their tethers appeared as thin lines plunging directly into the breach after a moment one of the tethers Shook and a ripple rolled up the lone cable Hay
ward frowned oron piloted the Drone but it was larger than the breach and unable to enter after them the camera feed alternated through infrared exposure and FLIR readings but failed to penetrate the ship's Hull what's happening in there Dean asked Hayward asked again keys and Jones hurried into their spacewalk gear Dean flipped through the communication channels but the feed was empty they've disconnected I'm not getting a signal in there Hayward said his jaw firmly I don't like this case Jones
with me they hurried into their complex equipment and gathered at the airlock Keys was the first to exit and Jones waited to follow the airlock was only single capacity and took two minutes to pressurize Lincoln's voice crackled through the comms Hayward and Jones pushed away and hurried back to the bridge Hayward returned to the window and saw two dots emerge along the structure Lincoln Brown what did you see the breach directly accesses a corridor but about 20 meters down the corridor is seal
ed the plasma cutter might be able to get through but no idea how heavy this we suspect it is not a dual airlock so our primary concern would be purging the atmosphere upon the structure I don't know what material they 'll date but our radios have no signal in there Lincoln explained Hayward pondered for a moment Jones came to his side while a ram and Dean waited for Direction entering now Hayward announced you have three Aram replied Brown entered first disappearing into the dark chasm Hayward
waited at the rear while the others followed looking back over his shoulder Hayward saw a ROM silhouette behind the viewing window of the Blackwater Hayward nodded and wriggled through the jagged opening the Eerie silence and complete darkness pressed in with a suffocating sense of claustrophobia the headlamps of the other crewmen formed beams through the silt of floating debris inside the corridor pushing against the walls Hayward moved to the rear of the group as they approached the seal Linco
ln announced over the closed circuit comms Channel an arc of light flashed in the darkness but no sound followed the tension grew as Lincoln directed the cutter along the perimeter of the seal Dean asked Hayward turned his gaze until his headlamps illuminated Dean's narrow figure straight onto US Lincoln stopped cutting the other crewmen looked at one another and then to Howard through all this time Howard paused seal will be ejected through the Hayward nodded and Lincoln proceeded a minute of S
ilence passed before Lincoln's voice entered the channel sale let's get let's begin during The Cutting process but likely means we've got atmospheric pressure on the structure place a thermite charge on the seal and Retreat to safety safety we'll wait out the decompression from here Hayward ordered Lincoln's headlamp appeared as he rounded the corner and joined the other crew members each man fastened his tether inside as Lincoln prepared to detonate Tremor rumbled up the corridor as the seal br
oke loose debris cascaded down the passageway and vaulted into the vacuum of space followed by the dark shape of the seal thumping down the corridor and tearing free sheets of paneling the atmosphere sucked at the crewmen and pulled them toward the breach but their tethers anchored them safely to the structure their headlamps illuminated this seal as it drew near and then sucked up into the breach lodging itself in place the Roar of wind raised in Pitch as debris knocked free from the seal becam
e wedged in the breach likewise more debris continue to accumulate on the breach and the airflow steadily dropped until it was hardly noticeable away from the breach itself Hayward seemed satisfied and was the first to look up and point his headlamp down the path ahead sediment filled the corridor and lowered the visibility to 20 meters Dean piped up Hayward led the way jetting along slowly with his thrusters blockage freeze itself that would be unfortunate Hayward replied with a smug grin after
a slight hesitation the others followed Dean took up the rear the passageway straightened and formed into a spacious central line with numerous corridors branching away Into Darkness Hayward paused to release a trio of sonar drones to Aid in mapping and showed the central line to be over 200 meters in length as the drones reached the end of the central line and then turned down side corridors their signals disappeared from the feed well it looks like our Radio Systems will only work line of sig
ht don't wander off from the outside the structure appeared massive but never would they have anticipated such a dizzying Labyrinth of corridors Keys piped up headlamps turned to focus on him by the far wall he lingered at a small window in what looked to be a closed door the door was locked but Dean found a control panel nearby powered with an emergency auxiliary lever after a dozen cranks the panel blinked on and following some trial and error the doors swung open the controls were surprisingl
y intuitive headlamps washed over the room and keys was the first to enter various items hung suspended in zero gravity boots a rag and what looked like a candy bar Lincoln and brown exchanged looks of concern they were disturbingly unremarkable indistinguishable from any ordinary human design Hayward tried to reconcile what he was looking at with his eyes maybe whatever built this place looks like us a Fascination seemed to fade but the boot was stuffed into Key's bag to be analyzed back at the
Blackwater Dean's attention shifted to the surface of the corridor a dark material covered the walls floors and ceiling Hayward was the first to notice it back at the breach but it seemed more concentrated at this part of the ship Dean noticed a cluster of needle spines protruding from a concentration of the material at the edges of a ventilation shaft Dean adjusted his comms channel to address only Howard Hayward come take a look at this Hayward separated from the others and examined the odd c
luster can you secure a sample of that looks like a building component D nodded and reached for the cluster of needles his fingerprints gripped the sides of one of the thicker spines and he proceeded to snip the base of the material the needles were not as brittle as they looked so Dean Twisted with his hand for leverage but in doing so stuck his thumb with another needle in the cluster Hayward looked over as Dean grunted in pain yeah I just poked myself being dismissed he pulled the spine free
and collected it in his research bag examining his hand Dean spotted a DOT of Blue from where the suit was punctured and sealed itself thumb itched to fight vessel we have roughly two hours of oxygen and it is our priority to locate two things two things the bridge command and the power source to accomplish this we're going to separate into two groups Lincoln Brown and Jones will search for the power source Keys Dean and I shall search for the bridge we have exactly one hour to search before we
reconvene we need to find a new exit as we cannot use the breach from which we entered we will likely lose Conti shirt a video record your directions it will be profitable to compile a comprehensive map of the structure once we return to Blackwater that's all let's get moving navigating the dark sediment-ridden corridors of the structure was a surreal experience the silence was broken only by The Faint sound of breathing over the communication channels away from the central line the corridors we
re Tighter and unable to navigate VIA thruster the men were forced to move single file and pull themselves along the Walls by their hands the Black Water had identified the bridge command from outside before the Excursion began but maintaining bearings inside the structure was an entirely different Endeavor altogether especially with no contact to their ship he's asked over the radio no one answered but Keys felt led to continue I dove the SS Antilla in Aruba twice once at night that's what this
feels like silence the darkness the eeriness Keys trailed off and no one spoke for a few seconds I don't like it Keys was right about the eeriness tension was nearly overwhelming any excitement or wonder seemed to be quelled by the looming sense of dread that hung in the atmosphere obstruction at 35 meters Dean announced monitoring his radar instruments their headlamps pressed into the walls of the passage like The Feelers of an ant through a tunnel the corridor widened to over a dozen feet acr
oss but a large reinforced doorway barred their path the black material crossed the surface of the door in in a regular fractal pattern more growth-like than a deliberate construction pattern Dean examined more of the needle clusters in a large growth at the edge of the doorway peace see if you can operate the control panel if not we have the plasma cutter Keys found another auxiliary control and powered up the control panel after some trial and error the door rolled back with a reluctant groan
their headlamps dissipated into the empty darkness before them broken spines and black material drifted freely in the atmosphere not this far from safety Dean was the first one to enter sediment and growth covered a series of massive display screens along the wall a vacant chair sat to the front facing a window barred by a solar shield from the outside Hayward followed and searched the other side of the room Keys approached the small pillar at the front of the vacant chair is it me or does that
look like some sort of outbreak good idea I think it looks more like benign growth that's just gotten out of hand whoever would have been cleaning this place he's cocked his head to the side and dusted off the top of the pillar to his alarm a light blinked on in a soft tune chimed Hayward and Dean turned instantly and waited for something to happen a blue light flashed and scanned the room in multiple directions Keys recoiled Hayward reached into his bag and Drew out a translating computer desig
ned to decode unknown languages in minutes Mission Control demanded it in the case of an extraterrestrial encounter the blue light focused on him as he approached hello Lincoln paused at a junction unsure which path to take Brown superimposed their estimated position on an external map of the structure Blackwater picked up a heat signature here if there was an internal power source to the structure it would likely be located there and that would mean go round pointed Lincoln turned right and led
the way a grouping of doors appeared and lined the corridor on all four sides Brown gasped a bunk doesn't look all that different from what we've got on the black water Lincoln made sure to record several videos of the rooms through the port windows in each door 20 meters down the corridor a door appeared which led to a dark kitchenette not much further a cafeteria came in a view Lincoln announced to the video recording the corridor stopped and took a dog leg left the dark materials seemed to g
row more concentrated and clusters seemed to become more plentiful and large the reactor should be just a straight shot ahead a long narrow utility Corridor plunged away into the darkness before them there's nothing on Geiger Jones noted the spines slowed their progress but at the end of the long tunnel a door with a simple turning wheel at the center appeared Square diagram with a symbol sat at the center of the door probably radiation warning Brown pulled on the wheel but it held fast focused
charge of thermite should melt the locking mechanism are you serious detonating a charge near a potential energy sources Reckless on the dangerous for everyone on the ship it's not an explosive it's a burning agent I don't care we don't need the molten still floating around in zero gravity a plasma cutter plasma milled steel too just here is the plasma cutter Lincoln ordered Brown begrudgingly obeyed and activated his plasma cutter while Lincoln and Jones lingered back the cutter flashed brightl
y and made a soft phase the wheel drifted away and the door swung open gently Jones's geiger counter began to click the blue light scanned Hayward from head to toe the others waited unsure what to expect after a moment a voice responded from the pedestal in a foreign language that sounded Vaguely Familiar Hayward held the computer and it projected an image of a human the pedestal turned its focus to the computer the pedestal spoke and the Translating computer alternated through various images af
ter a moment The pedestal's Voice increased Pace tenfold in the computer word and he struggled to keep up pictures of planets and fruits and cities flashed in a blur as the computers exchanged information the crewmen watched and wonder the light on the pedestal suddenly turned and focused on Hayward hello Dean reached down and powered down their translator the pedestal had already learned their language in seconds Jacob Martin keys we are members of an international effort to explore and collect
information on this structure the Blue Line remained on his face what is the purpose of this structure the pedestal hummed I am the spirit of consecration my purpose is classified the voice was the ship he's asked Hayward frowned I was built by the Hagar space coalition my construction was completed in the year 3781. Hayward and Dean shared a look of confusion that can't be right how long have you been have you been Dean asked I am the spirit of consecration I have always been here Hayward rega
ined control of the Inquisition it is the year 11 to 14. Hayward looked at the others Dean's eyes widened yes Hayward was at a loss for words where did you come from where can we find Hagar coalition Dean asked I do not understand I have always been here I have never moved in my Builders they are gone they destroyed themselves only I remain we don't have time for this we found the bridge we need to Rendezvous with the others he's reminded the light flashed over to him the others how many are you
he's replied a chill crept up hayward's spine something felt wrong how did you get here the pedestal asked no one answered this time are you from Earth a cold chill filled the room that's impossible why is that impossible the light flashed over to him you should not have come here he said no the doorway rolled closed before they could move to escape I cannot allow another Annihilation event not again Dean backed away and drifted to the heavy door Hayward stared with the blank gaze Hayward what
the hell is going on Hayward asked the pedestal word they were destroyed by the parasite the parasite consumed everything in its path I will not let that happen again Hayward felt his stomach twist Dean whimpered the black stuff he swallowed nervously Hayward was visibly shaken the light flashed from one man to the other Hayward moved for the door and Drew out the plasma cutter you cannot leave the structure began to shake a rumble echoed through the darkness and the bridge command suddenly fill
ed with light Hayward turned on the cutter and pressed the ark to the door Dean's voice trembled the Solar Shield was receding the spines grew larger and more pronounced as they neared the reactor core a space appeared over a dozen feet across descending into blackness Jones's geiger counter clicked and whined their headlamps washed over thousands of needles collected on the walls of the reactor and throughout the room Jones Drew close to the spines some grew five feet in length now along the re
actor wall Brown searched the far side of the room a metallic glint caught his eye he picked his way over the spines to draw nearer Jones drifted up with the thrusters and moved to inspect the exhaust vent Brown paused as he found the metallic glint to be a reflective Insignia on a strip of fabric Lincoln scanned the room with his headlamp for the video recording hey Lincoln Brown's voice trailed off the strip of fabric was a sleeve attached to a twisted and contorted body jammed into the cluste
r of spines Lincoln's headlamp turned over and settled on Brown and then the entire ship seemed to Roar to life Jones hovered over the exhaust vent and was melted instantly a superheated steam blasted through the coolant pipes the spines began to Ripple and Shake what's happening Lincoln cried out sediment blasted into the atmosphere as the room awakened Brown hurried for the door as the engine room writhed and squirmed around him a figure came tumbling down the corridor from the direction of th
e crew quarters a jumbled mess of Limbs and splinters contorted beyond recognition Lincoln looked back just as the figure slammed into him and ripped into his suit Lincoln let out a blood curdling scream that struck Brown to his core both bodies were sent careening across the engine room to land amidst the clusters of spines with a sickening squelch Lincoln's scream stopped but his body continued to thrash and twist Brown looked away and turned in time to see another creature barreling into him
the Solar Shield lifted as the ship's power returned filling the room with Rich sunlight the spike clusters began to vibrate Hayward snarled you cannot leave the voice spoke again in an eerily calm tone Dean asked pointing across the room a shape began to stir as if absorbing the sunlight Keys roared condensation began to collect inside hayward's helmet as he focused on cutting through the door the other men's cries became more fevered as the body awakened the body began to shake and convulse mo
re frantically Hayward finished and pulled the gap of metal away from the door so they could Escape Dean was the first through but before Keys could flee the body came barreling into him at full speed slamming both men into the door Keys managed to throw the body off and make it through the opening across the room the body righted itself and launched for Hayward this time moving quickly Hayward lifted the piece of the door just in time and the body landed with a wet thud the corridor was now ill
uminated by light and the walls all around began to vibrate and hum the parasite was awake he's cried out in pain and looked at the spines protruding from his arm where the body had struck him blue sealant poured out from the suit in a futile attempt to close the numerous punctures are you all right Dean asked Keys cries grew in Pitch fingers suddenly Twisted with a snap and then his elbow turned at the joint with a pop Hayward and Dean recoiled an alarm he screamed in agony Hayward and Dean mov
ed at Reckless Pace back to the Direction They Came trying to backtrack the Labyrinth of corridors would have been difficult but Hayward had traced their headings with a line of cable inhuman noises echoed through the hallways of the ship as unimaginable Abominations closed in on them they passed the closet Keys had spotted on the journey out and turned down the corridor to the breach the blockage had grown over their escape cutting through it with the plasma cutter would be an impossible task w
e're trapped Dean said hopelessly his eyes turned up past Hayward and filled with alarm Hayward turned back as a mangled figure launched into him burning spines tore through his suit and bored into his flesh Dean cried out and backed away there was nothing to be done Hayward groaned in pain and pushed Lincoln's body away the thermite thinking quickly Hayward turned on the plasma cutter and lifted it as Lincoln launched into him again the plasma Arc pressed against Lincoln's bag and ignited the c
harge releasing a flash of light and intense heat Hayward kicked off Lincoln and pushed his body into the debris the debris melted and with a sound of wrenching metal was ejected into the vacuum Dean cried out as he was swept away with the atmosphere tumbling uncontrollably into space no tether but suddenly His Radio came to life oram's voice echoed through his headset maneuvering the surveillance drone Aram was able to catch Dean and carry him back to the airlock as soon as the cabin was pressu
rized Dean tore off his helmet and began sobbing Dean where are the others Aram asked they're gone they're all gone what's happened down there we have to go back for them Aram said no pleaded we can't go back please don't go back aram's concern increased take us home Dean sobbed Dean you're hysteric we need to wait for Mission Control no we're leaving now Dean paused wait where's my back what are you doing a raw masked what's in there Dean removed his bag and placed it in the airlock we can't br
ing it back we need to destroy it what's in the bag Dean ejected the airlock and fired the spine sample off into Oblivion before slumping into the glass good Lord Dean Oram complained you're not making any sense please God don't make me go back Dean whimpered Ram shook his head in unbelief you'll need to rest all right I'll review your video recordings and send them to Mission Control but right now I need you to relax you can do that for me the knotted weekly good go get yourself cleaned up Dean
moved over to the living quarters pausing at the mirror he looked at his reflection his face was pale a bead of sweat lined his forehead and his stomach felt uneasy orom's right to rest retiring to his bunk Dean resigned himself to sleep we're going home Dean smiled and thought little of the itch in his thumb

Comments

@jamesmorgan3032

Goes to show that although vision is 80 percent of our perception, sound and imagination is often under appreciated but is just as riveting. Great podcast.

@kevincaruthers5412

They sure are enthusiastic about destroying portions of an alien structure they have next to no information regarding.

@georgejones3526

Amazing how many people who watched this also saw the movie “Splinter” (2008).

@darenmcaninch242

So this is where the organism in the Splinter movie came from…. Nice!

@JeremyRDavis

The movie Splinter is a clear inspiration for this. Very cool.

@glovere2

It’s more likely a mission to a blocked entryway would drill a hole big enough to send a tube through with a camera and diagnostic equipment. Better yet a dozen tiny drones that could survey beyond the breach. You would have a detailed scan of every reachable area to plan the next phase of the mission. They would have been prepared for that in this scenario to minimize risk and prevent any accidents. Robots go in first before you would send humans in to investigate. We have that technology now and we would definitely use it in this situation. You wouldn’t even need humans to risk their lives if your machines were sophisticated enough. It’s such an incredibly dangerous environment for our frail biology. Anything that hazardous and unknown should be reconned first before anyone sets foot in there. Having said all that, it’s an awesome story just as it is. It just got me thinking more deeply about the idea and activated my imagination and my emotions, which is what makes it a great story. It inspired me to comment. Machines will be better than us at everything eventually. Humans being the risk takers in this story is part of its charm. The risk is key to the storytelling. High stakes and greater dramatic tension. Superb narration.

@jamesrogers1554

I can’t say this story was particularly well written. The characters seem to have gone to the Prometheus Astronauts school when it came to anything mechanical or scientific. It also feels like the author had just watched the movie Splinter and decided to put it in a sci-fi setting.

@darklight79797

The best narrator for sci fi hands down

@glovere2

Reminds me a little of Arthur C. Clarke’s story, Rendezvous with Rama. Terrific storytelling.

@georgejones3526

It sounds like the creature from the movie “Splinter” (2008).

@nickwest1337

When you cross the Proto-molecule from The Expanse with the Oil from Splinter.

@laurelsilberman5705

Amazing story. So well narrated, loved the effects on the voices and the different characters’ accents.

@arievena19744

It's always a great day when I'm notified that Magnetar has a new story. Thank you so much! Your hard work is very much appreciated.

@TheWiseOnceSaid

The re-listenability of your channel is unmatched. This is another classic. Thanks Mags! 🙏💪🏼

@ET-lf7cw

Getting poked by something on an alien ship is never good

@Snapper314

This could serve as an excellent Prequel to the Movie Splinter 2008. Amazing and well made story!

@hollygolightly2777

I couldn't to get home and listen to this narration!!! Missed you 👾 Happy you're back!!!🌛🧑‍🚀🥰

@cgreenland05

Good to see you thriving bro

@mjskinner9288

Thanks Magnetar 👾👽

@isaiahsalazar9476

This has a lot of subtle references to halo